H. B. Ransom

First novel · In progress

The world doesn't exist yet.

H. B. Ransom writes dystopian science fiction — stories about ordinary people working out the rules of a system that was built to outlast them.

There is no book to buy, and pretending otherwise would be a poor way to start. What there is instead: a world that is mostly built, an outline being written into it, and a shelf of books this one is aiming at. If you'd like word when there's something to read, follow along.

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Where things stand

  1. Premise
  2. Bible
  3. Outline
  4. First draft
  5. Revision
Working title
withheld
The world
mostly built
Cast & canon
settled
Outline
in progress
Form
first person, standalone
Target length
90,000–110,000

The world, the cast and the rules of the place are largely worked out. What's being written now is the outline — the shape the whole thing has to hold.

The book

What's being written

A dystopian science fiction novel — a standalone, set a few decades from now, in a country where an artificial intelligence quietly runs almost everything and the people living under it are, by every measure they have been given, comfortable.

That's about as much as I want to say for now. Not out of coyness: it isn't finished, and the parts I'd be tempted to describe are exactly the parts most likely to change. I'd rather under-promise here and let the book speak when there's a book.

What I'm willing to commit to is the shape of it. First person, past tense, aiming at 90,000–110,000 words. It's a book about comfort and what it costs, written on the conviction that a story like this only works if the trade is honest in both directions — no villains, no speeches, nobody defeating anything with a clever plan. If the easy life in these pages reads as a cage from page one, I've written it wrong. If the harder one reads as idyllic, I've written that wrong too.

Closer to the shelf below than to anything with a chosen one on it. If you liked what The Will of the Many does with a system of power learned from underneath, or what The Giver does with a place that seems fine, it's being written toward that.

Influences

The shelf this book is being written toward

The fastest way to tell a reader what a book is, before the book exists, is to tell them what it's standing next to. These are the ones that set the target.

Elsewhere

Follow along

Same handle everywhere — @hbransomwrites. This page stays deliberately quiet; the work gets talked about as it happens over there.

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